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a poem for james moody


its not very good,

You were a young man, just 24 years of age
pulled down in the sea and killed by a violent wave
i look at a picture and see your face
it wasnt fair! are you in a better place?
your family were distraught, they couldn't accept gods plan
why did he take you? you just a man
what was the reason? was it just fate?
that you left this world to enter heavens gate?
so young and cheerful with a life of your own
yet you went with so many, you were not alone
a father who loved you asked wher you are
then he made a wish to god that he give you a star
91 years later, i often wonder where you are,
but every time i see a star so bright and clear
it brings to my eyes a peaceful tear.

what do you think, dont laugh its the first time i've put any of my poetry on the internet lol

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Thank you for posting that I think it is very good,well done!!!

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Excellent Work! I know I couldn't post my work! emoticon
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Beautiful poem, it is, mrsmoody. It brought even a tear or two to my eye, because if you replace James Moody's name with Will Murdoch's name, your poem would fit him to a "T" too.

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I second that, MurdochsAid...it IS a lovely poem and a very good first effort. I always have considered Moody's death, whilst heroic, very sad, as he was so young, with so much ahead of him. Keep writing, mrsmoody! emoticon

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awesome totaly
that is very sweet and not bad at all .
thanks for sharing that with all of us,
wills

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Beautiful...just beautiful...I even have written some guitar chords that goes with it and sang it to some of my friends. They loved it!! emoticon

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Beautiful absolutely beautiful...thankyou so much for such beautiful words for such a beautiful person..have i said beautiful enough??? Ah one more...very beautiful. I have some poems i have wrote on him and also on the tragedy itself that are currently at my moms house, but will try to get a hold of them

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Hi Titanicangel, you're right it is a very beautiful peice of work....we can't wait to hear yours...I am sure they are as nice emoticon

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Hi Titanica

I second your thaughts here, I too look foword to seeing them here.

Graham is having a brain wave here how many people have wrote a poem or verse, Hold up your hands and I will tell more

Ohh and titanica you may be a big help here will talk later my friend

Graham

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